Friday 17 August 2018

descriptive writing

For writing this week we have been working on descriptive writing. Mrs Clark gave
us this picture and we had to brainstorm Nouns, Verbs, Adverbs and Adjectives that
we thought could help describe the picture. we used these words to create a
paragraph.
After we had written we then self assessed to see which of the the descriptive words we used. I really liked this activity because its Friday! Next time I would like to include more writing. WALT:  Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers

Adjectives
Nouns
Verbs
Adverbs
Broken
Beach
Crashing
cloudly
Abandoned
clouds

stormy

waves



My paragraph


One stormy night there were 3 men on a ship the waves were crashing  the ship into the rocks then the ship got washed up onto the beach the ship was broken then the men abandoned the ship.

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